Chloe Brotherton

English 1510

September 26, 2012

Peer Review Practice

                The essay “Due Tomorrow, Do Tomorrow” wasn’t the best of essays.  It lacked many essay essentials, like an introduction, thesis statement, supporting paragraphs, etc.  It also broke some essay rules, like saying “I.”  “Due Tomorrow, Do Tomorrow” was constructed more as a novel rather than an essay and had a lot of unnecessary portions, like the Desperate Housewives part.  Some good things about this essay are it definitely kept me entertained and even giggling at some parts while reading.  It had paragraphs and looked like the person actually put some effort into writing this since it was seven pages.  Some bad things about this essay are that it was written really poorly, almost like a 7^th grader wrote it.  It was full of many grammar and punctuation errors, some of which were unnecessary.  Example: “. . . I had— and it had benefitted me greatly.”  There was no need for a ‘—’ in that sentence.  It was a pathetic excuse for an essay and I would give it a C-; even though it didn’t really explain anything but I can see the person put a little bit of effort into writing this.