joe miller

Chloe Brotherton

Peer Edit for Joe Miller

November 26, 2012

                I thought this was a good piece, it stuck to the topic of the discourse community very thoroughly.  It didn’t really tell me about the Athens music community, though, and how the music would be considered a discourse community.  What I liked about this paper was the fact that the data was extremely analyzed and collected in an organized manner.  You can tell that Joe put a lot of time and effort into collecting the data.  What I didn’t like, though, was the fact that the paper focused more on interpreting what a discourse community was, rather than applying the Athens music community to a discourse community.  It had complete sentences, good grammar and spelling, and a nice structure.  Overall, I thought Joe Miller’s essay was a good one.