Chloe Brotherton
Peer Review for Nick
November 26, 2012
I
thought this was a good paper. There
were a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that you basically
nailed this assignment. I like how you
chose the Pittsburgh Steeler football organization as your discourse community,
because I am a Steelers fan myself!
Steeler fans are very passionate about their team and they really are
the definition of a discourse community.
You did a great job providing background information about the
organization, but for the collecting data portion I was a little disappointed
because your paper was lacking an interview.
Besides that, I’d say you did a good job writing this paper.
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